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======Jefferson Gets Food Poisoning======
**Date:** 1865.09.27
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<#bill: Sounds good. Then I guess I don't need to be involved :-) #>
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**Date:** 1865.09.27
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<#bill: Sounds good. Then I guess I don't need to be involved :-) #>
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<#ann: It's on the timeline as September 27, 1865. It's before you show up, sorry. I wanted Celeste to have a positive experience where, at least in her mind, she saved someone, and she needed to have that before chronically-ill Erin, who is never helped, shows up. #>
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<#bill: What's the date on this? #>
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Jefferson steals ++something++ **hot cross buns** he shouldn't from the kitchen dumps and it gives him food poisoning. He is very ill for a few days, but eventually recovers.
**To this day he doesn't like dessert stuff, and Celeste does most of the desert cooking.**
Is this an okay place on the timeline? I thought it would be better to put it in before Erin gets there so that she's reacting to an acute sickness rather than a chronic one.
NeedsAnn - **Looks good to me. I fleshed out some minor details.***
**To this day he doesn't like dessert stuff, and Celeste does most of the desert cooking.**
Is this an okay place on the timeline? I thought it would be better to put it in before Erin gets there so that she's reacting to an acute sickness rather than a chronic one.
NeedsAnn - **Looks good to me. I fleshed out some minor details.***
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NeedsKelly Is this an okay place on the timeline? I thought it would be better to put it in before Erin gets there so that she's reacting to an acute sickness rather than a chronic one.
